Hydrangea 2
Hananobe-no-sato (Flower gardens) have many kinds of hydrangeas as many people visit these gardens. They also have a gallery of the Japanese traditional dolls called Hina-ningyou.
Hina-ningyou is ornamented in Girl’s day called Hina-matsuri on March 3. Originally, dolls were set afloat on a boat and set down a river, taking troubled or bad spirits with them about 1,000 years ago.
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